What is the EU?
Lorry driver has to come to terms with his decision to vote to leave the European Union. He is faced head on with a situation which causes him to spill his guts.c
I have the right elements here for my story, but my problem is finding the right order to put key moments in to make the best of them.
Examining my idea the things that I notice is that I have 2 strong story elements that could both in theory be their own separate films. My challenge is to glue them together seamlessly to make an even better film, that is not too over complicated.
Most important moment
Lorry driver discovers that there is a group of immigrants in the back of the lorry.
I see this is as a very pivotal point in the story, it could be at the beginning or end which gives me a dilemma.
Beginning
Lorry driver is driving away from Dover along the motorway when he hears a sound from the back of the lorry. This causes him to pull into a car park and investigate, to his horror he discovers a group of tired and hungry immigrants in dire need of help. This causes him to ring up the radio station and apologise to the radio host and to his son.
End
In this circumstance he would ring up and apologise for his actions before ending with the discovery of the people in the back which would provide a certain surprise and shock to the situation. Only confirming his feelings.
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