ROUGH CUT FEEDBACK

After discussion and feedback today I have some things to work on in the edit and possibly do some pickup shots.

Feedback:

Part 1 -

1. Actor looking at camera - Solution: Re-Shooting/Pickup shots of this location
2. Panning shot out of focus and catching up with actor - Solution: Re-shoot 
3. Thinking about Sound Design

Part 2 -

1. Entrance into house very "domestic" (not like east enders) - Solution: Re-shoot

Part 3 -

1. Opening dissolve plus colour doesn't work - Solution: Adding titles between each part, and colour correction
2. Sound on conversation voices needs to be re-addressed - Solution: ADR sound recording using David and Harry (substitute voice for Callum)