READDRESSING THE EDIT (THE MEETING)

So after some advice on Tuesday about my edit so far, I have returned to the editing suite and addressed some of the issues and queries that were brought up:

• Firstly the main thing with my whole edit is the lack of variation in shot types, in terms of mediums, close ups and wides. This therefore has restricted me in some ways, but it is something I will be sure to accommodate for on future projects.
• The second is a more specific issue in relation to the first, in that jumping from a mid shot to a mid shot doesn't have much of an effect with the edit.

• Finally there was a problem with a couple of the shots of Dannie at the end of the shoot. I am not entirely sure how I missed the blurred pictures. I have to say though the fact I was in a rush to use the all the light available may have been a contributing factor to this.

So I have sat down now and had another go at the edit, the only thing now is that it is slightly shorter than 2 minutes, but I am wary now not to lengthen it for the detriment of my story so I will have another look with caution. 

This is how it is looking at the moment almost the finished product and something I can export:

Almost there